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What needs improving
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What’s missing
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Jack
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· Good clear plans for film.
· Good analysis showing understanding of how meaning is created.
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· Correct use of capital letters and use paragraphs.
· Turn storyboard around
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· The locations post seems rather minimal and the picture does not
show.
· Does your film need a script?
· Preliminary storyboard
· Need at least one more analysis.
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· Analyse one more film opening.
· Try to vary your presentation – use a range of different programs
e.g Padlet, PPT, prezi etc.
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Jemma
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· Some good comments.
· Some use of variety of presentation
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· More evidence of digital presentation of work – too wordy.
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· Analysis of existing film openings – You need 3.
· Camera shot types task
· Prelim storyboard
· Survey and results
· All planning for your film
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· More images, gifs or clips needed to be used to illustrate/explain
points on your blog.
· Get up to date with your work – remember you are marked on
TIMEKEEPING too.
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Jess
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· Everything ! Incredibly detailed, excellent use of presentation
methods and very high level of analysis/reasons for choices. A methodical
worker.
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· The Happening analysis – upload issues
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· The editing worksheet (from mrs Scales’s lesson).
· survey of your audience.
· Location plans
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· Continue as you are doing. This is fabulous.
· Make sure all your more detailed plans for your film (shooting
schedules, organization of actors, props, costumes etc) are uploaded to your
blog
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Jo
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· Well presented blog
· Clear progression of project and justification for choices made.
· Really like your sidebar – interesting and well presented.
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· There are some photos missing on some posts (eg costume plans).
· The post about the ‘Cabin in the Woods’ seems to just be the film
opening – no analysis?
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· Conventions of film openings
· A third analsyis
· Prelim storyboard
· Animatic
· Film names plan/reasons
· Script (if needed)
· Shooting schedule
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· Your analyses could be
improved further to consider more about how meaning is created and how
narrative is established.
· Check all your photos o your posts to make sure they are still
there.
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Megan
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· Beautiful presentation.
· Varied use of digital methods
· Clear ideas for own film
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· Analyses could be more detailed, considering how the meaning is
created and its intended impact on the audience.
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· Third analysis
· Storyboard for film and animatic
· Plans for film name
· Location shoot
· Prop list
· Shooting schedule
· Evidence of organization of actors
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· Make sure all planning is uploaded.
· Try to include some evidence of progress of project – e.g. behind
the scenes, a filming diary or something.
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Polly
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· Detailed, thorough work.
· Very good analysis.
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· Make sure you discuss your survey results and analyse how they
will impact on your film.
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· All preliminary work
· More 9 frames
· Timelines of film openings
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· Upload preliminary work including your evaluation.
· Keep doing what you’re doing – it’s good!
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